Tips to improve your writing
Hello!
Olga, the topic you write about is complex... You are spot on when you write that there is no right or wrong answer. Personally, I have good male friends and as we say in English, 'there is nothing between us' - which means we have a platonic friendship. Let's have a look at some ways to improve your writing... You write:
...relationship between man and woman
This should be 'between a man and a woman' if the nouns are singular, since singular nouns need to be preceded by an article such as 'the/a/an'. An alternative would be to write: 'between men or women' which is correct without articles... see my last blog for more on articles!
Be careful with the position of frequency adverbs when you write:
A coin has always two sides
The word 'always' is a frequency adverb and should be placed before the verb:
A coin always has two sides
But remember that frequency adverbs always go after the verb 'be': I'm often late for work! In the following sentence you use the verb 'winding up':
Nowadays the difference between two sexes is winding up and is becoming more and more unclear.
The verb 'wind up' is usually used to mean 'to finish'. Did you mean that it's getting more complex? Another common mistake in English is with the use of 'In these days':
In these days, females have become as active as males...
It would sound more natural in English to write 'Nowadays / Today / In modern society.' And lastly...
The basics of friendship are interest and confidence, not gender!
The word 'confidence' in English is used to describe people who are very sure of themselves. I think here you mean 'trust'?
If anyone has any questions, don't hesitate to ask in a comment below this blog!
ÃÛÑ¿´«Ã½work answers
Well done to those of you who completed the homework. Here are the answers:
1) an
2) no article
3) no article
4) the
5) no article
6) no article
7) the
8) an
9) no article
10) no article
ÃÛÑ¿´«Ã½work
Let's practise using frequency adverbs: always, often, usually, sometimes, from time to time, rarely, hardly ever, never.
Mr Couch is a very lazy man. Rewrite the sentences with a frequency adverb:
Example: He is happy when he's cleaning the house.
Answer: He is never happy when he's cleaning the house.
1) Mr Couch does the washing up.
2) He sleeps until midday on Sundays.
3) He does his English homework.
4) Mr Couch lies on his sofa watching TV.
5) He goes to the gym to exercise.
6) He phones his girlfriend because he feels too tired to walk to her house - even though she lives round the corner!
Comment number 1.
At 26th Mar 2012, Rajeeb wrote:Dear Rosie,
Thank you for your advice on frequency adverbs. I often tend to make mistake on this. I'm doing the homework so that I remember it forever - it should come after 'be' verb (am, is , are, was, were etc.) and before all other verbs.
1. Mr. Couch rarely does the washing up.
2. He usually sleeps until midday on Sundays.
3. He hardly ever does his English homework. (but I usually do!)
4. Mr. Couch sometimes lies on his sofa watching TV.
5. He often goes to the gym to exercise.
6. He always phones his girlfriend because he feels too tired to walk to her house - even though she lives round the corner.
Would you kindly give me an example of the usage of 'from time to time'. Secondly, I've noticed that while writing Mr. Couch, you wrote Mr (without the dot), is it a practice in British English? Or, is it a modern trend?
Regards,
Rajeeb
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Comment number 2.
At 26th Mar 2012, HelloAriadna wrote:Hi Rosie!
Here is my homework:
1) Mr Couch hardly ever does the washing up.
2) He always sleeps until midday on Sundays.
3) He never does his English homework.
4) Mr Couch often lies on his sofa watching TV.
5) He never goes to the gym to exercise.
6) He sometimes phones his girlfriend because he feels too tired to walk to her house - even though she lives round the corner!
Very funny this Mr. Couch!!
See you!
Ariadna from Argentina
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Comment number 3.
At 27th Mar 2012, Sai-fung wrote:Hi, Rosie,
Thank you for all you wrote to us. I have learnt so much English skills from you.
My homework's answers as following,
1) Mr Couch rarely does the washing up.
2) He always sleeps until midday on Sundays.
3) He does his English homework from time to time.
4) Mr Couch offen lies on his sofa watching TV.
5) He hardly ever goes to the gym to exercise.
6) He usually phones his girlfriend because he feels too tired to walk to her house - even though she lives round the corner!
Hope my answers are right. ha! Ms Roise, I have read all the blogs you teachers and students wrote. That is hard to find a web site like this. I could read English writings and different comments from all over the world. It is a real world unity. Thank you all so much!
And, I have a English question to ask. It is from the teacher Graciela's blog she just posted- The torch is coming to town! The first sentence on her blog's fifth paragraph she wrote that "A picnic on a Brighton beach went swimmingly". Sometimes, I saw after a verb using an adverb to make a completed sentence, like it. Is it better to use a noun or an adjective after a verb? Do there have any criteria of using an adverb after a verb to make a sentence? When I'm making sentences it always bothers me. Thanks for solving my problem.
Blessings,
Sai-fung from Hong Kong
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Comment number 4.
At 27th Mar 2012, Pary wrote:Hi Rosi ,
It 's my first comment on your Blog ! I 'm Pary from Iran and I have visited ÃÛÑ¿´«Ã½ Blog almost from the first . We are so lucky to have ÃÛÑ¿´«Ã½ kind and motivate teachers ! and here is my homework
1) Mr Couch rarely does the washing up.
2) He often sleeps until midday on Sundays.
3) He from time to time does his English homework.
4) Mr Couch always lies on his sofa watching TV.
5) He hardly ever goes to the gym to exercise.
6) He usually phones his girlfriend because he feels too tired to walk to her house - even though she lives round the corner!
I think there are more than one answers , are n't ?
have a nice days and bye
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Comment number 5.
At 27th Mar 2012, Pary wrote:Sorry I must write A nice day ! just A slip of the thumb ;)
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Comment number 6.
At 27th Mar 2012, krisztina wrote:Hi Rosie,
All of your corrections you made give us a big help in our learning process.
I agree with most of the answers above and I would like to add a new sentence for them trying to use 'from time to time' structure.
He does his English homework from time to time but he should do that more often in order to archive a higher level of English.
Please, keep on helping us as you have done it for weeks.
Yours truly
Krisztina from Hungary
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Comment number 7.
At 27th Mar 2012, krisztina wrote:This is Krisztina again.
I mean: ... in order to 'achieve' a higher level of English.
Have a nice day for you.
Krisztina
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Comment number 8.
At 27th Mar 2012, Jow SingSing wrote:Let's practise using frequency adverbs: always, often, usually, sometimes, from time to time, rarely, hardly ever, never.
1) Mr Couch rarely does the washing up.
2) He always sleeps until midday on Sundays.
3) He never does his English homework.
4) Mr Couch often lies on his sofa watching TV.
5) He never ever goes to the gym to exercise.
6) He often phones his girlfriend because he feels too tired to walk to her house - even though she lives round the corner!
Precede before never and ever usually has/have for present perfect but to do this ought to change your verb to be past participle, it sounds strange to me in present simple tense. To improve our writing we must read and write as much as possible, the more we gain the more we confidence. Just use it naturally and not to mention correctness for grammatical which I think sometimes happen even to a english speaking persons.
Don't you think so!
from Jow
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Comment number 9.
At 28th Mar 2012, tenocht wrote:Hi Rosie,
Please, help me !!!
What is the difference between "have" and "have got"
I wonder if you could give me some examples.
Thank you.
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Comment number 10.
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Comment number 11.
At 29th Mar 2012, Rajeeb wrote:@ Krisztina from Hungary,
Thanks for the example of 'from time to time'. I really appreciate it. Have a great day!
Regards,
Rajeeb from India
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Comment number 12.
At 30th Mar 2012, Yury_Sh wrote:Hallo Rosie,
First, some words about human relations. I do believe that platonic friendsip is quite possible between men and women. Why not? Indeed, interpersonal relations vary within a wide spectrum of attitudes, including love, friendship, fellowship, acquaintance, with a lot of nuances. This wide spectrum leaves much space for nonsexual communications, especially for people who have quited their hypersexual ages, isn't it?
The hometask.
1) Mr Couch hardly ever does the washing up.
2) He always sleeps until midday on Sundays.
3) He rarely does his English homework.
4) Mr Couch usually lies on his sofa watching TV.
5) He never goes to the gym to exercise.
6) He often phones his girlfriend because he feels too tired to walk to her house - even though she lives round the corner!
Best regards,
Yury_Sh
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Comment number 13.
At 16th Apr 2012, Soler wrote:Hello Rosie,
I find your each lesson so useful and interesting and do you know why? I feel that you are doing the job that you like very much and you are doing it with full of hearth. So It makes sense :-) Now ÃÛÑ¿´«Ã½work:
1) Mr Couch never\rarely does the washing up.
2) He usually sleeps until midday on Sundays.
3) He does his English homework hardly.
4) Mr Couch often lies on his sofa watching TV.
5) From time to time\Sometimes he goes to the gym to exercise.
6) He always\ever phones his girlfriend because he feels too tired to walk to her house - even though she lives round the corner!
I tried to use all adverbs of frequency to not leave any of them without attention :-) I hope I also used them correctly and in proper way.
Sofiko
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