Cartoons and crowds
Hi Emilio,
Another great posting from you, thanks. Your photo with the 'On the Internet, nobody knows you are a dog' caption got a huge laugh when we saw it in the ÃÛÑ¿´«Ã½ Learning English offices! Your posting also had lots of good advice, as well as some interesting questions about trust, faith and the power of numbers.
One thing that caught my eye was your piece on the translations available for I miss you in Spanish. You said of the two translations, one of them (te echo de menos) was correct because (my emphasis) it had more results pages. To me, that raises an interesting question about the power of crowds. Does a crowd really always know best? What do you think? And I do mean you, you individually - you Emilio and you, the person reading this blog right now. Do you think a group of people always knows better than an individual person? Answers below please. Who knows, maybe we can do our own ÃÛÑ¿´«Ã½ Learning English 'Power of Crowds' empirical research, right here!
Turning to the vocabulary and grammar aspects of your blog, today I thought we'd look at formal and informal writing and punctuation.
Formal and informal writing
I've noticed an interesting anomaly in your writing Emilio. On one hand you're very informal - using emoticons - you know, smiley faces and the like made from punctuation marks like this ;) and :( And you use lower-case letters for words that usually have capital letters. Both of these are features are very informal writing. On the other hand, you don't use contractions at all, and this makes your writing sound very formal.
My advice (since this is an English-learning web exercise) would be to use capital letters where they are traditionally called for (for example on Spain and Spanish) and to start using contractions to make your writing sound less formal.
Here are some of the most common contractions. I'm sure you know plenty more too. Why not try using them a bit more? It'll make your writing sound a lot more informal. I promise!
I am - I'm
she is - she's
you are - you're
I would - I'd
I had - I'd
I will - I'll
do not - don't
cannot - can't
Can you see where you could incorporate my advice in the following sentences from your blog? 1 - 5 are about contractions, 6 - 9 are about using capital or lowercase letters:
1. Today I am going to speak about how I use some internet resources.
2. I don't mean I will speak about ...
3. If you do not have to write a blog ...
4. And I would like to listen to your feedback...
5. I hope you will enjoy reading it.
6. How I use the Internet ...
7 In order to practise english ...
8 ... you could write in twitter.
9. ... got get help with english and Spanish vocabulary.
Punctuation
In English we have different marks that we use at the end of sentences.
A. We use a full stop (.) at the end of a sentence.
B. We use a question mark (?) if we're asking a question.
C. We use an exclamation mark (!) if we want to show something is very surprising.
Unless we're writing for a cartoon magazine, we don't usually use more than one ending mark per sentence (What did you say!?!??!!). And when we're quoting what someone else says, if the quote finishes at the end of a sentence, we don't need a full stop at the end of the quote, as well as another full stop at the end of the sentence.
Your second batch of homework is to find the punctuation mistakes in these sentences and then correct them.
10. ".... it's what Google says it is.".
11. Then write about it!.
That's all from me. Have a good weekend. And if the sun comes out for even a minute this weekend in rainy London, I promise I'll put my sun-screen on!
Nuala
Vocabulary
caption - words that are written underneath a cartoon or picture to give more information about the picture
caught my eye - my attention was attracted to
emphasis - the importance or attention that you give to something
crowds - a lot of people together
empirical - based on what is experienced or seen rather than on theory
anomaly - something that is different from what is usual
On one hand ... On the other (hand) - Fixed expression to show two different aspects of a situation
incorporate - include
a cartoon magazine or a comic book - a magazine, usually aimed at children, which has drawings of characters (for example, adventure heroes), with speech bubbles to show what characters are saying and thinking
Comment number 1.
At 14th Mar 2010, Tienhoa wrote:Dear Nuala,
Thank you for your a piece of advice about writing in English. To be honest, like other English learners I face up to writing skill. It is difficult for me to organize ideas as well as link them together when writing essays. In addition, the punctuation and grammar in pieces of writing are also difficulties to cope with. Hopefully receiving more advice from you in the future, aimed at improving English writing skill.
Regards,
Tienhoa, Vietnam
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At 16th Mar 2010, Emat from Kazakhstan wrote:Hello, Dear Nuala.
Thanks for your a greatly usefull explanations in English language and the questions for students.
Well, I'll try to answer to your questions also.
1.Does a crowd really always know best? No, does'nt. Definitely.
2.Do you think a group of people always knows better then a individual person? It's may be. It's possible if the talk about, for example, a group of some scientists, academics or a group of students of ÃÛÑ¿´«Ã½ Learning English or members of House of Lords, because, in fact they are also a group of people. They are not?.. It's worth to take heed of theirs opinion. Although here it's all depends on who is this mentioned individual person...
By the way, in an epilogue of the novel L.Tolstoj's "War and Peace" in detail describes the nature of crowd and its power (or weakness, what who would like).
P.S. I think, a quantity indicator not necessary definition of crowd.
Regards,
Emat.
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At 28th Apr 2010, Ashish wrote:Hi Nuala,
It is another good delivery from you that will benefit us undoubtedly. So, thanks a lot.
In some extent, I do agree with Emat. However, there is a proverb, 'In the globe, the fools are major in number'. I find it true in almost all cases except some exceptions.
Regards.
Ashish, Bangladesh
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